Common World Domination - Chapter 1 - smallsoap - Katekyou Hitman Reborn! [Archive of Our Own]

khrmeme:

Hi there, I’m currently trying to write a spin-off of those varia oc fics everybody and their dog seem to love fucking up (lol) & while i admit that the beginning chapters are a bit oc-centric, i’m trying to moderate the pace (canon appearances will definitely become strong later on)

but anyways,, I’d like to know what you guys think? I’d really enjoy advice on the pacing of my writing + anything else that may sound awkward/unclear ^w^ thank you for your time!

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Hello there! 

I just finished reading through your fic and wanted to say a few things.

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aaah thank you so so much for taking time to review my fic!! :’D it means a lot to me that you enjoyed it so far! thank you for pointing out the thing w/ the commas; i will do my best to work on that!